| "Others above thyself, God above ALL!!" The motto of Jakes Christian regiment |
| "Others above thyself, God above ALL!!" The motto of Jakes Christian regiment |


The Tempering Ch 1Jacob William McCormick grinned from ear to ear. His hands trembled slightly as he maneuvered the one-person space craft in a tight circle and back towards the main brig. There was one less evil in the world to deal with.The Tempering Ch 1
"Redemption, this is Red Horse 1, do you copy?"
"Jake! Welcome back - in one piece, I assume?"
Blue-green eyes rolled at the on-board speaker. "Hamilton, where's the captain?"
There was a slight pause. "Umm.... you remember that lovely new linguist we picked up a week ago?" Jake was ready with a reprimand before John Hamilton could continue, but his friend beat him to speak


The Big Oops StoryThe Big OopsThe Big Oops Story
He really should have known better.
Jake McCormick, leader of the Christian Crusade, Warrior of God, really should have known better.
"They prefer darkness over the Light, because the Lights makes their evil deeds known."
He gritted his teeth against the tremor in his own voice. His mind couldn't even thinking of the actual verse - he would have to settle for paraphrasing tonight.
Common, eyes... adjust already!
Jake continued to follow the wall with one hand, feeling his way further into the inky blackness of the back alley.
That should


Tempering PrologueHow will I find him?Tempering Prologue
Youll know, child. The ring-
Elsbeth sighed in exasperation. I know, I know! The ring will alert me to his presence. But that doesnt tell me where to go to make that happen! Details, Serina!
Patience, Elsbeth. Im getting to that.
It was the soothsayers turn to sigh. Candlelight cast long shadows against the rich fabrics that adorned the room they occupied. Once again Serina closed her eyes, outstretched hands hovering inches above the oracle. As humming commenced Elsbeth turned her thoughts inward.
| WELCOME to the INNER SANCTUM |
| Artwork to droooooooooooooool over!!!!!! |
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~J
wanted 2 let you know
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use your imagination
BUT..thanks again..
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Propel, propel, propel your craft, placidly along the liquid solution. Ecstatically, ecstatically, ecstatically, ecstatically...existence is but an illusion!!!!!!!!
Have you thought about a book cover for Tempering yet? When you create one, I'll add it to the writings like I'm doing for Invincible, and I'll put it on my front page too.
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"Hey Dan! Mom-"
"Hello?"
"Dan? I said Mom-"
"What?"
"Dan?"
"You're breaking up."
*Shouting* "Dan! Can you hear me now?"
"Hello?"
"Daniel! Mom said to-"
"This is my voicemail. Leave a message." *beep*
"...I hate you." *click*
Me vs my bro's voicemail.
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Propel, propel, propel your craft, placidly along the liquid solution. Ecstatically, ecstatically, ecstatically, ecstatically...existence is but an illusion!!!!!!!!
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"Hey Dan! Mom-"
"Hello?"
"Dan? I said Mom-"
"What?"
"Dan?"
"You're breaking up."
*Shouting* "Dan! Can you hear me now?"
"Hello?"
"Daniel! Mom said to-"
"This is my voicemail. Leave a message." *beep*
"...I hate you." *click*
Me vs my bro's voicemail.
I wont put it up til I KNOW your online..I want you to see it FIRST!!
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Propel, propel, propel your craft, placidly along the liquid solution. Ecstatically, ecstatically, ecstatically, ecstatically...existence is but an illusion!!!!!!!!
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"Hey Dan! Mom-"
"Hello?"
"Dan? I said Mom-"
"What?"
"Dan?"
"You're breaking up."
*Shouting* "Dan! Can you hear me now?"
"Hello?"
"Daniel! Mom said to-"
"This is my voicemail. Leave a message." *beep*
"...I hate you." *click*
Me vs my bro's voicemail.
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